13. First Go! (13)
Ally suspected she was being delusional many times, but the voices from outside the window were clearly screaming out—“—Crown Prince! Crown Prince!”
I, I never expected any of this…
Ally unintentionally closed her eyes.
On the back of her eyelids, she could already imagine the appearance of Maximilian.
He was someone who loved reading books rather than holding a sword, had a slightly bashful personality, had slender body, and a flourishing height.
Silver hair that flowed down his back. A pair of violet eyes. His features might not have been perfect, but his overall delicate beauty was akin to the religious painting of an angel.
“Ally, don’t worry? Elder brother Maximilian is a good person, so you don’t have anything to worry about.”
Ally opened her eyes and found Stila, who was staring up at her.
“Lady Stila, have you met the Crown Prince before?”
“Yes. About two years ago. Older brother snuck in to meet me before he departed for the mountains. He’s, how to say this, a sweltering man, but a big and kind man none the least.”
Departed for the mountains? “Sweltering”? Big and kind!?
Ally tilted her head at the words that she would never use to describe Maximilian.
She heard the galloping of a horse outside the window.
Apparently, the horse bearing Maximilian had arrived.
Ally looked out of the window stiffly, like a doll with broken string.
Then, she saw a figure that didn’t match the memories of her previous nine lives whatsoever—
—who, who is that!? Who the HELL is that!? Whooo iiis thaaat!?
Ally looked at the person who had descended from the horse with her eyes narrowed to the maximum.
Short hair standing upright. Eyes much too sharp. Well-trained pectoralis major muscles. A pair of too thick upper arms—although he wore a flamboyant costume like that of a prince, all the buttons seemed ready to fly.
Huh? Wait a minute…? If I look at him closely, his feature resembles those of the ‘former’ him…
…but, no matter how much I think about it, he’s too different!
The former him resembled that of a beautiful angel from a church painting, while the current him is like the jacked, muscular, hero that appears in the children’s favorite picture-story show, “The End of the Century”!!!
Ally staggered backwards.
Abel, who had returned ever since when, supported her when she was about to fall.
“…Abel, it’s not good to suddenly ask this out of the blue but… turn, turn THAT away with your magic—!”
After helping Ally stood, Abel made a large cross using both of his hands in front of his chest—
—Ally nodded—yeah, not possible.
From the current Maximilian’s body, magical power that normally shouldn’t be leaking out was leaking out.
An aura of magical power surrounded his sweltering muscles. It was as if he was ready to detonate with a push of a finger. Perhaps that was why those people who were supposed to be holding Maximilian back were instead sitting back—they were scared.
“Stila! Your brother has arrived! I’m sorry for letting you experience such hardship the entire time I was away from the royal palace!”
Even your voice is frickin’ different—!!! Seriously, who the hell are youuuuu—!?!?
Apparently, just as Ally received a different life in her tenth reincarnation, Maximilian also lived an entirely different life that time.
***T/N:
“Yes. About two years ago. Older brother snuck in to meet me before he departed for the mountains. He’s, how to say this, a sweltering man, but a big and kind man none the least.”
—WHAT DO YOU KNOW THAT I DON’T!?
Well, I know you guys have been asking for le proper ML for some time now… would that suffice?
Cuz that sure as hell ain’t the prince–THAT’S DIO!!!!
In case you guys were wondering, I’m positive “The End of the Century” was the Fist of the North Star reference–so this was how Maximilian’s current appearance roughly looks like:
But, for Translator’s personal preference, she shall imagine him as Jin Kazama from Tekken series instead–
There, much better.
**E/N: So, the reason he looked like that before is because she was there??
***T/N: YESN’T
****E/N: is that a yes or a no??
I like the thought of him being a Jojo character over him being Jin.
Wait, the PRINCE also went the Yunica route? I was going to just bail out of this story if FML kept simping for the ML, but now I want them to share workout tips and diet advice.
Uhhhh, so author have muscle fetish?
Pillar men theme intensifies
And im loving it!
Doesnt matter if hes changed he better have all previous 9 lives memories so that he will then have to beg her hand and lots of other stuff to make up to her
Thank for the chapter ^^
“The End of the Century”!!! OK, with this, their image in my head are
The prince = Kenshiro
Ally = Raoh in maid uniform XD
The former him resembled that of a beautiful angel from a church painting, while the current him is like the jacked, muscular, hero that appears in the children’s favorite picture-story show, “The End of the Century”!!!
I find it funny how the first thing that came to mind when “The End of the Century” was this gay movie I watched
Wow this story is more interesting than i thought from the description in the past life I’m not ready for muscled macho prince. So the theory is because he has a beautiful fiancee in the past life he became a beautiful boy to match his fiancee but because he didn’t have a fiancee in this run he’s free to do whatever he wanted and he choose body building.
I gagged. ??
And the current Ally is a fitness buff too. This is probably one of the most original couple I’ve read for a while now
Ok, I was definitely not ready for the introduction of the prince who stole whey protein. I am so ready for the next few chapters. Again, thanks for the translations!
Muscle fest is here! YAAAAAAAY!!!! ???
I imagine Maximilian looking like this.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/751608625281608265/
Ah yes. The male lead of the novels mom use to borrow
Where everything about them is “rippling, swashbuckling.”
It’s the main theme of all Harlequin novels. =D
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/kamen-no-maid-guy/images/b/bc/Kogarashi.png/revision/latest?cb=20180728000204
That’s her when the prince sees her lol.
I genuinely don’t understand what y’all mean when you say he was puny in the past lives because of her? Which ‘her’? Ally or the charm creep? How?? Why?
What?
I’m all for him being a jacked muscle-brain, though, I mean IDGAF about this dude AT ALL so he can be whatever, just stay outta Ally’s effin life.
Will there be any more clarity in the next chapters? Hope so.
As always, a joy to read any translation from American Faux, the t/l notes give me life.
Worry not about that. We are just theorizing. After all i am jumping in blindly.
Many thanks for the clarification.
I hope they become her muscled horsies and she and Stila get to ride in a carriage of shiny muscles that smell like flowers and isn’t somehow horrifying and gross because it is just muscle men in the shape of a carriage and/or acting as horses.
cuz why the eff not ayy
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…
I.
Don’t.
Understand.
Ohm Saints, the prince is actually hot. I do believe it’s givings me a case of the vapours
Starts fanning herself
Prediction: Maximilion discovered buff people have more magic power.
Alternate thesis: he rewound to stone for his sin.
Are you okay.
Yep. Just didn’t expect for a Prince in one of these stories to be one of my 3 types. I like muscular men.
Ehem. I’m… going to put my hopes on him being decent. Solely because of his appearance! Let’s hope that he’ll resist the charm magic.
thank you 🙂 looking forward for their meeting
Thnx for the chapter!
Okay~
Plot twist : Dumprince reincarnated once as well or something?? And knew that Ally was actually innocent so this time tried to become macho as heck or something to resist charm magic spell and save Ally and his sister or something??
Would you like that kind of development instead?
Wow, who knew she was influencing him like that when she was still a Duke’s daughter…
That aside, I’m fine with him being all buffed up and all, but I hope he hasn’t become a muscle brained moron as well. I’d rather him be more Jin Kazama than Johnny Bravo, if you know what I mean.
But my previous prayer and hope still remains, she must not fall in love with him no matter what…
If she can use him, may she use him, but she must not rely on him, must not develop a dependence on him of any kind and must not develop any kind of feeling towards him (other than what she’s feeling now).
rolls around laughing
“Silver hair that flowed down his back. A pair of violet eyes. His features might not have been perfect, but his overall delicate beauty was akin to the religious painting of an angel.”
Now that angel just transformed from the regular angel to an angel of death……he’s gonna kill you with his muscles. His transformation is like the Almight’s transformation from a very thin man to a muscle man.
The author should have inserted a “don don don don (rumbling)” sfx, when the prince arrived like how they do it in Jojo’s. Didn’t expect Maximillian to just max out his muscle size.
Remember when I said Ally might have a Moustafa Ismail arms, I apologize I was wrong. The prince was the one who had that arm. And what the hell was he doing in the mountains??? Was he fighting with a bear????
Still I am hoping for Abel to be the male lead.
To Commander Antoinette Vanessa,
Surprise! I am here!!!
You might be wondering why I am here…..well this dumb ass made a mistake. This dumb ass lost their sense of time and couldn’t tell when the 31st is and thought their internet will expire this afternoon so this dumb ass kept on reading manga and playing brawl stars thus leaving 20MB of data for internet…….but as it turns out it wouldn’t expire yet cause it was just the 30th and the notification from the network provider was just them reminding this dumb ass that they only have 20MB left. Now this dumb ass has to be careful with reading chapter updates to not completely use up the remaining MB and make it last for the update of the other novel I read……LOL
Sincerely,
This Dumbass called Gabe
#THEBIGGESTPLOTTWIST
The current Maximillian:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FcjMcSwKCGB1FUEPaQ_NtBGl5_oJanKi/view?usp=drivesdk
Phew…..my 5MB made it.
When will the load bro return
In a few more days…….don’t really know when.
Did he go to the mountain to train with maximilian
All I know is they’re currently at work, I’ll ask when they call my sibling.
Does ur sibling depend on him too?
YOU WA SHOCK
NO U
It’s too late, the prince has become a muscle hero
HOKUTO SHINKEN IS INVINCIBLE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2si7rRX8SYY
HOLY SHIT THE LYRIC RESONATE WITHIN ME.
YOU WA SHOCK INDEED.
Is it weird that all of my hatred for the prince instantly dissappeared after this chapter? I have high expectations for this new prince, and I sure hope he’ll reach my expectations! Maybe he can help Ally with the Ally-bootcamp theory! Go kinniku!
Nope not at all. Its indeed super not cliche. Salute to the author!
So why is he different? Is he someone else?
The answer is…. On the future chapter!
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lol this story is a wild ride. Muscle heads EVERYWHERE