22. The Secret of the Royal Family
…How strange?
Who would had thought of this development?
I never recalled any scenario in which His Highness Lyon visited the Kingdom of Haulfa…
Was fate changing?
…About that girl, Baroness Schmia, was it—?
…No, her real name wasn’t Baroness Schmia. What was it again?
Indeed, certainly, her name was—
“…Your Highness, umm, for the time being, let’s put all that aside.”
I couldn’t. I just couldn’t.
I thought it would be better to deal with those confusing facts later.
Once I casted all those things aside, I recalled his previous statement—
—Baroness Schmia wasn’t the true culprit?
Then why would Baroness Schmia be judged like that?
…Would the irrevocable evidence not work against her, then?
Towards my suspicious gaze, His Highness laughed bitterly.
“…I said that it’s the King’s order, didn’t I, Tia? I only received one order from my Father. That is, to the nip the seed of disturbance at the bud.”
“…?”
Said ‘seed of disturbance’ was probably Baroness Schmia, I guess…
His Highness continued to speak as I kept quiet.
It seemed that it was a good choice for me to cast aside my feelings and whatnot. Otherwise, I would surely have utter something dumb. Not like I had any confidence to speak anymore now anyway.
“There are times where a King needs to be ruthless and make a judgment that would seems cruel to others. My Father is probably attempting to test my capability in that regard. In this case, Baroness Schmia is innocent. She chased men and did nothing else… however, that girl could have still sparked a war. The Kingdom of Dirlia is a prime example. It’s the royal family’s obligation to extinguish such sparks before they can ignite into big flames. That way, there won’t be a second happening of Dirlia in Haulfa Kingdom.”
His Highness smiled weakly.
Looking at him, I felt uneasy. Was he always this expressive? I always thought he was expressionless, but why did he suddenly turn into a different person altogether?
I didn’t understand why…
“Then… who’s the real culprit?”
“…A name came up. It’s already been checked by Lyon. I want to capture this person immediately, but I have no solid evidence yet… and unlike Baroness Schmia, she mastered the art of ‘Charm’. Her aura of fascination has a very high purity. In this Kingdom, those who can’t be affected by said ‘Charm’ are only His Majesty the King, this Crown Prince me, the Second Prince Almys, …and lastly, Vioris.”
“…Sir Vioris?”
That unexpected name struck me.
His Highness grew a little uncomfortable, but locked his gaze with me. He seemed resolute, which in turn, made me nervous.
“…Tia, this is the secret of the royal family, only known to the King, me, and the Prime Minister. There’s also that one maid of His Majesty… Vioris is the real first prince of this country.”
“…eh?”
Those words made me silent.
First… Prince? Wasn’t that His Highness?
…Huh?
My head stopped working again, as I could only stare at His Majesty.
His Majesty began his explanation while casting his gaze down.
His long lashes thinly obscured his blue-green pupils. His appearance was that of a beautiful young man tinged with anxiety.
The handsomeness of His Highness was seldom seen in this kingdom.
…come to think of it.
Vioris was also a quite charming youth. I wondered why was that—was that because of the royal bloodline? If so, I’d like a drop of that blood…
I listened to His Highness while pondering about the idea of being a vampire.
“Did you know that His Majesty originally had a concubine?”
“…Suzanna, wasn’t it? That, if you’re asking her name.”
Her Highness Suzanna…
…She had a very ephemeral presence. I heard she was a fairly delicate person. Indeed, it would be befitting to think that Vioris was her son.
At this point, I had finally succeeded in associating their appearances. Thus, I swallowed the fact that Sir Vioris was the former first prince.
“Yes, how much do you know about Lady Suzanna?”
How much…
I uttered all the information I learned in Queen’s education.
“It was said that Her Imperial Highness’ health was very poor. She faded soon after she got married…”
When I told him so, His Highness lifted his gaze. Our eyes met. It was as if his gaze pierced through me.
He opened his mouth with a heavy expression and said firmly.
“…Right, in historical books, that is how it was recorded. But the fact isn’t so. Lady Suzanna was driven out of the castle during the absence of His Majesty, by none other than Lady Catherine, my mother. Then, Lady Suzanna, who was pregnant, gave birth to a child in the slums—that child is Vioris.”
“…”
Due to shock, I had no words.
I couldn’t come up with anything to say.
His Highness seemed a little worried as to how to proceed, but he resumed again.
“It was only a few years later when her health did deteriorate… at that time, Vioris had already grown accustomed to the slums. When he was over ten years old, he discovered magic. The same with Almys, he possessed a royal-level magic. He took the swordsman test and was immediately summoned by my Father to the Royal Palace. At that time, my mother had already passed away. My Father invited Vioris to return to the Royal Palce, but he refused. Vioris chose to climb to the first class on his own and live as a swordsman.”
I gasped when I heard that from His Highness.
“…This is the secret of the royal family. Vioris is arguably this kingdom’s first prince, that’s why he’s immune to ‘Charm’.”
Vioris was the son of a concubine, while His Highness and Almys were the son of a Princess. It would spell no difference towards the fact that His Highness was conventionally the Crown Prince. However, the reveal that there was a secret, former, prince still shocked me to no end.
***T/N: You Prince who didn’t quite excel at basic communication, when did she ever asked for your family pedigree’s detail? Is this how smartmale! Trick their dumb fiancee into not-divorcing them?
and… oh my god… where do I begin… are you guys ready… 3… 2… 1….
///EXPLODE///
“There are times where a King needs to be ruthless and make a judgment that would seems cruel to others. My Father is probably attempting to test my capability in that regard. In this case, Baroness Schmia is innocent. She chased men and did nothing else… however, that girl could have still sparked a war. The Kingdom of Dirlia is a prime example. It’s the royal family’s obligation to extinguish such sparks before they can ignite into big flames. That way, there won’t be a second happening of Dirlia in Haulfa Kingdom.”
OH MY GOD, I AM SO SORRY YOUR MAJESTY THE KING, SO IT TURNS OUT THIS ISN’T YOUR FAULT AT ALL KNEEL IT’S YOUR SON’S, HE’S… HE’S A PLAIN ASSHOLE!!!!
The King told you to be ruthless and nip the problem at the bud, not STRING ALONG TWO EQUALLY AS DUMB GIRLS INTO YOUR EQUALLY AS STUPID DELUDED DEFINITION OF “ruthless, cruel judgement” FOR 20 CHAPTERS DAMMIT. WHEN THE KING SAID ‘CRUEL’, HE DIDN’T MEAN FOR YOU TO BE AN ASSHOLE ABOUT IT, DAMMIT!!!! NOW LETS BREAK DOWN HIS IDEA OF RUTHLESS BUT SOUND JUDGEMENT SHALL WE!?
-LET’S SAY NOTHING TO MY SHELTERED FIANCEE ABOUT …BASICALLY EVERYTHING
-LET THE THOT PRANCHES AROUND MY OFFICE DAILY
-FOR SOME REASON, EVEN THOUGH THERE’S ALREADY SOME ESTABLISHED EVIDENCES, I SHALL PLANT FAKE EVIDENCE INTO THE THOT …FOR REASONS. AND I ALSO SHALL HAND THE JEWELRY TO HER, RIGHT IN FRONT OF EVERYONE INCLUDING MY FIANCEE!!!
-HUH, WHY IS MY FIANCEE ACTING SO DISTANCE?
-SHE KNEW I LOVED HER!!!
-WAIT, DOES SHE?
-WELL, I LOVE HER THO. SHIT, I LOVE HER SO MUCH, I CAN’T PROCEED WITH THIS PLAN THAT HAS ALREADY INVOLVED MANY, MANY PEOPLE INCLUDING THE NEIGHBOURING KINGDOM’S PRINCE
-OMG I CAN’T STAND THIS ANYMORE I MISS MY FIANCE, I SHALL BOTCH THIS PLAN HALF WAY, FCK THOSE WHO HAVE FALLEN VICTIMS TO HER WITCHCRAFT, FCK TRYING TO SEDUCE HER TO GAIN MORE EVIDENCES. I SHALL JUST CONDEMN HER PUBLICLY LATER. THIS IS WHERE THAT FALSE EVIDENT PLAY ITS ROLE. PHEW. GOD BLESS THE QUEEN FOR I AM QUITE A WELL-PREPARED PERSON WELL SUITED FOR THE JOB.
-TIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-MY FIANCEE WORE THE DRESS, EVERYTHING IS DAIJOBU NOW. MM SHE SMELLS GUD.
-WHETHER SHE KNOW OR NAH, THE JEWEL SHE WORE IS THE TRUE QUEEN JEWEL. MARKED AS MY WIFE!!!!
-THE TIME HAS COME, I SHALL EXPOSE THE THOT AND BE EXTRA ASSHOLE-Y ABOUT THE ENTIRE THING!!!
…I can’t with this Prince…
You guys might argue, “B, but it’s proven that Schmia might not be the true perps, he said it himself!!!” –IN WHICH THE REAL PROBLEM LIES. NOW HE’S BASICALLY FRAMING AN OTHERWISE INNOCENT PERSON USING FALSE PLANTED EVIDENCE, AND FOR WHAT??? ASSHOLERY–!! HE WASTED ALL THAT RESOURCES (YEAH THOSE GEMS) JUST TO FRAME AN INNOCENT PERSON HE COULDVE HANDLED MORE COMPETENTLY.
Guys dont lose faith, my other stories have great mcs, mark my words, check them out.
Dear Translator, I thank the heavens for your comments! They make it all better – even an infuriating story filled with unbelievably dumb characters like this one!
/P.S.: Someone might wonder as to why I badmouth the WN but still read it – well, I cannot drop it because I already started it and my curiosity would eat at me if I don’t finish at least Part 1… xDd/
Anyways, thank you for all your impeccable translations, and amusing, witty and/or insightful notes. I have read quite a number of the translated stories on this website already and it is always a joy to read! THANK YOU!
jajajajajajjaa, esto es una locura estoy leyendo esta historia solo para poder terminarla pero en definitiva he podido soportar esta historia gracias al traductor.
Al igual que el comentario de arriba muchas gracias por tu trabajo
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I love reading your translations, especially for the comments!
Yeah, I take back what I said on the last chapter. Its just the prince who’s terrible. I forgive the King, except he probably should have trained his son better.
Also, Vioris is the true first prince! crossed fingers please be the real male lead
Is his eyes green, or blue?
Blue green, aka teal or cyan.
I see, I mean I know people whose eyes change color, so I mean there is that option, but I understand its a mixture now lol.
If she has such strong ‘charm’ why not just hit her from afar with arrows or send some gay guys burn her or a gay assassin will do not enough why not just lock her in a her residence and burn it up.
Why waste time playing lover when you can just gather information about her and the person behind her then swiftly off them ,why ?!!!
Am I the only one who thinks this could have ended far faster and easier if he had thought of her as a bug(thot) and captured ,tortured her then swiftly killed her and her backer.
And also for Fuck’s sake if he had a proper information gathering organization it wouldn’t have even begun.
I love this suggestion……….THOT killer help me ask Commander Antoinette Vannessa for permission to build THOT Patrol’s very own ANTI- THOT squad consisted of gay spies……they would be like the Spanish inquisition but a lot fancier
S-sure……….
WAIT GABE ARE YOU GOING TO DRAG OUR REPUTATION THROUGH MUD
No…not really. I just like the method the Spanish inquisition use to extract information and to punish people………just thought it would fit as punishment for THOTs and ASSHOLE princes.
Can a guy be called a THOT
A lot fancier? Explain your proposal in great detail!
Being a THOT knows no gender and age. But we generally refer to male THOTs as FUCKBOYS here in our country and as a rule one must stay away from them. Just talking to them can give you a disease as bad as an STD.
They should wear something like this:
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Or this
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Or this
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Or this:
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Or they can just wear something simple like a feather boa or a ruff even tinsel would do if the budget does not allow
Choose your pick if you don’t like em you can choose other ones as long as the new squad uniforms looks fancy………
And unlike the Spanish inquisition who burn people in open fire, I propose to use a crematorium for burning THOTs and Assholes. The ashes will be used as cement to make housing for the less fortunate. You think its too much cruel???
Does it??? I wonder???? Well as long as its fancy I don’t have qualms about it.
P. S.
I made an official request for the squad. I wanted to make a powerpoint but I don’t know where I can put it so I resorted to text format. Its basically the same thing just used different wordings see below if you are interested…..
Proposal of the creation of THOT Patrol’s THOT and Asshole Inquisition Squad.
Background:
As General Antoinette Vanessa’s translations continues the number of THOTs and ASSHOLE who are detrimental to our MCs welfare has increased. To ensure that the THOT patrol continues its efficiency in safeguarding the welfare of the MCs from the translated novels and protect our ships from emotional and physical harm caused by THOTs and ASSHOLE, I Lieutenant General Gabe of the THOT Patrol propose the creation of a squad that will help us in achieving our goals. The proposed squad shall be referred to as THOT and Asshole Inquisition Squad
Squad purpose and member composition
THOT and Asshole Inquisition Squad shall be composed, as suggested by Colonel Thot killer, of gay (may refer to ones gender or emotional disposition a.k.a. happy ( as long as the member is happy he/she/they can be assigned or apply to be transferred to the squad) assasins and be led by an officer with a rank of Lieutenant Colonel or higher.
The squad duties mainly includes investigation of the crimes of the accused and the implementation of punishment of the accused once proven guilty.
Note: Punishment to be given includes acts that may or may not resemble the punichment used by the spanish inquisition
Squad uniform proposal
Please refer to the links below
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https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn%3AANd9GcSlQCTACtTcT3xWFCZ6B5mvrqF4IOaHsLkBoHLHZ8TspPc7GUuj&usqp=CAU
Note: Until the budget proposal is created and approved the squad shall remain wearing a t-shirt bearing the name of the squad and wear a feather boa to live up to the Lieutenant General’s aspiration of making the squad fancy
HAHAHA WRITTEN LIKE A TRUE TEACHER. On a side note, is this how an actual proposal looks like?
Ok gabe, I leave the interior decor to you. I shall hereby transfer the budget to execute le plan.
WHAT SHALL THE LOGO AND MOTTO OF THIS DEPARTMENT BE GABE
I pick this one https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn%3AANd9GcT5x6Ri7ZOZudT8C0TS5yE5W49vicgWuosWaucShS3FcfA5H0J6&usqp=CAU
Whoops
Yeah I mean, this one
https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn%3AANd9GcT5x6Ri7ZOZudT8C0TS5yE5W49vicgWuosWaucShS3FcfA5H0J6&usqp=CAU
No no that’s actually a great idea. I want to cut cost to build my jacuzzi room too.
Do you think we should cement yashm to that tower of his
Maybe we should but I wanted to use it as cement for the tiling the floor……knowing his ash is on the floor would make walking at the HQ so much fun………
And like I thought you would also like that one its highly recommended cause it uses less cloth means less cost….and its the most fancy.
Forgot to add this one. Its also cool looking like it came straight out of assassin’s creed.
https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn%3AANd9GcSlQCTACtTcT3xWFCZ6B5mvrqF4IOaHsLkBoHLHZ8TspPc7GUuj&usqp=CAU
So cool, but doesn’t that give vampirey vibe
I don’t really know how the format of a proposal should be, so I just placed what I think should be included.
I am bad at making mottos and logos, so I would like to pass that job to the future squad leader. As of the moment I can only think of this as the motto, “I come, I read, I punish” and I am fine as long as the logo has a feather boa.
So in that note, the application for the position of squad leader for the newly formed THOT and Asshole squad is now open. Benefits include immediate promotion into the rank of Lieutenant Colonel or above of the THOT Patrol and the satisfaction of punishing the novel’s THOTs and asshole as you see fit and please be reminded that the only thing not fancy in this squad is the benefits but at leasy you get the satisfaction.
Send your applications including the motto you thought of, here in the comments section. The one who can think up of a better motto shall be named squad leader……..so you, yes you, the one who is reading this aside from Commander Antoinette Vanessa send your application now. Don’t pretend you aren’t there I know you are reading this.
https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/hulk_hogan_2.png
What do you think of a black and white sketch version of this one as the logo or we can replace the face with Angelica’s face or other daces if you want it Commander…..
How bout rave in feather boa!? He is our squad spirit animal now.
And Gabe, why do you insist on the boa?
Cause like I said the squad should be fancy and a feather boa is my definition of fancy, always has been until now.
Not the jay Gatsby jewel or sth???
Or is it the great gatsby
GABE JUST LIKE ROZE, whose romance tale started from a love potion, our friendship also started from a tale of a romance tale started from a love potion!!!!!!
Not not Jay Gatsby. He is fancy but I still firmly believe that Feather Boa is the pinnacle of fanciness anything compared to that is just a second rate fancy item.
And yes our friendship has started with a romance tale about a romance that started with a love potion. I totally did not expect to make a friend here cause I just started to comment so I have some place to take my thoughts about the things I read, cause the only person I know IRL that reads webnovels reads a different genre so I can’t have a proper discussion about it with them.
NOT ONLY THAT WE SHARE THESAME PREFERENCE IN CLOTHING TOO–No, not the boa, but those uniforms. Maaaan gothic is the new black.
When all your friends love 1000+ cultivation CN but you are a potato who prefer an actual pillow rather than that.
I WANTED TO WATCH GREAT GATSBY BUT THE MOVIE IS 560 MB BIG, FUDGE.
U kno what, i found a “tragedy” cn manga yesterday. And everyone is basically that romeo and juliet type who cant move on from their first crush (read: ~true love) and would rather choose a bullet to the head rather than getting on with life.
Which enrages me.
I used to play Tinier me and all the clothes and accessories my avatar has or the ones I wanted have designs either resemble the clothes in the links I shared or just some monochrome themed colored clothes.
And you are completely accurate about my friends reading 1000+ CN cultivation. Man those things are real long I already have a hard time remembering what happens in the story when reading a Novel of 100 chapters, I can’t last 1000+. That is a very Deku (U.A. Sara ni mukoe (or something) Plus Ultra) kind of thing to do.
If it takes up too much memory don’t watch The Great Gatsby re-enact it that’s a whole lot better…..all you need is a feather boa and you would be fancier than Jay Gatsby or Daisy with ease. BTW, Toby Maguire is the real victim in that film cause somebody killed his boy………..no…I mean bestfriend. Yeah it’s bestfriend you didn’t see me trying to say boyfriend. (Funfact: 500+ MB of data takes my internet at least 3 to 5 days to load so I usually leech of my friends or relatives’ internet to watch movies)
P. S.
What is this thing they call “first crush”??? Is it edible???
And not being able to overcome it, just what kind of thing did they do for each other to not forget it? And why do they associate Romeo and Juliet with first love? As far as I know Juliet wasn’t even Romeo’s first love, his first love was some side character I don’t even remember the name and if I am not mistaken she just disappeared somewhere in the story.
Stephenie meyer did associate first love with romeo and juliet. Do you like…… Twilight
ITS ROSALIND. OR ROSALINE. OR ROSALIN. OR ROSALYN
I tried reading the first book but didn’t finish it cause Edward just plainly creeped me out, dude was sniffing Bella if I remember. I am not that fond of romance novels that are written and published by famous westerner writees and companies, though I like their sci-fi and fantasy ones. Most of the novels I read that has the romance genre are written and published by Asian writers. And when it comes to romance works published by my fellow countrypeople I only read the ones published before or on the year of 1990s particularly the ones not published on wattpad. (Cause some of them have notoriously stupid plot and their grammar triggers the inner grammar Nazi in me. I keep on shouting “Its your own fucking local language, your ancestors and the ancestors of your ancestors has used the fucking same language why can’t you fucking write a sentence with the correct grammar in your own language, just what did you do in school!!!!!!!”)
That’s it. We are sister.
;-; that said I once sneakread my mom’s novel and there is this author I rly loved cause she know how to do passionate consenting romance even tho it’s set in medieval where women r property…. She is one of the classic romance author. Last year, she passed away, RIP.
LMAO meanwhile in my country most of the romance is about a peasant girl suddenly getting proposed by this rich ceom
You should try reading the novels written here in my country in the recent years the plot are either one of the things below:
• ugly people falling in love with a popular rich guy who they hate at first due ti some circumstances that push them to interact with each other, then the ugly person after a makeover becomes beautiful and ends up with the popular rich guy
• A girl so poor that they would be sold or work as a maid to some famous people (ex. A BTS member or A member of One Direction)
•plot resembling a 13 year old kid’s fantasy
•a plot you won’t even get the chance to understand the plot cause of very bad grammar that looks like something that got messed up by google translate.
I know its a long time since we started turning the comment section into a chat box and many might already got used to it (and sorry for that) but are you really sure it is alright to admit what your 12 year old self has done here (I know saying this is very dubious considering who this words are coming from)………..repeating INNOCENTLY thrice doesn’t help in clearing the suspicions of others who might be reading this you know…..
Dont worry its set to self explode after you reply 🙂
:)))
Gabe do you think you will continue reading tiarize again anytime soon
I am actually trying my best to get past this chapter but my internet has suddenly died on me and I am running on the remnants of free data that my network service provider has given me so I don’t think I would be able to proceed on reading the updates of all the novels I am reading so I may only be able to read at least a few chapters of Tiarize and not be able to read until the latest update. Why do you ask???? What happened???? Did Tiarize and the prince got a brain transplant and things started to proceed on an orderly manner????
P. S.
If my free data allows it I might also try reading the updates for a Thousand year villainess
To answer all of your questions about tiarize : nothing, no.
How unfortunate……but still I would be reading it and of course the purpose is to roast and to read Commander’s wonderful roasts and rants disguised as T/N notes…..HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
You almost took all of my words that I have no words to say now but thanks for being mad on your comments, I felt that~
other tls don’t really do that when there’s a extremely infuriating scene in a chapter~
Whoa dude. I mean you may be right, but I didn’t read that at ALL. My impressions are that
1) he can’t tell her anything because she may be his fiancee, but she’s not married into the family. Good or bad, this is a common thing where secrets are kept until the partner is actually part of the family before they learn everything unless a situationccalls for early reveal. This is it. (Outaishihi Ni Nante Naritakunai, Return if the Female Knight, and Villainous Doted by Crown Princess of Neighboring Country are some titles that come to mind for this and there are definitely others)
2) schmia may not be the culprit but she is definitely involved, she even implicated that “I was told this would work.” it’s a classic bait and switch. They make a fuss over the accomplice to draw out the main one.
3) everything is all planned for that kind of setup, he’s not half assing anything. Could there be a better method? Sure. But I’ll again point to Princess Bibliophile that had the exact same concept and dramatic reveal where the heroine was completely clueless and had no idea about true feelings because she was too absorbed in her own interests and dense (in a better way than Tia tho)
4) Tia is still unreliable narrator to judge prince. She already had preconceived notions and assumed everything. Letting Schmia THINK she was making progress and not telling Tia know is more of a convincing performance in effort to fool the main culprit (who is likely that woman Tia bumped into). Sure it sucks for Tia but when it comes to a high profile national security case like this, it’s only logical. Given how she portrayed herself, I wouldn’t tell her either. You don’t want your real target to know you’re onto them.
Anyway those are some of my thoughts. All actions taken seem reasonable to me in the context given. Whether prince is an asshole in his treatment to Tia from beforehand it’s hard to say. Remember, he mentioned the clouds and Tia didn’t remember. She thought he was talking about schmia but prince could very well have remembered and she didn’t. It sounds like she didn’t make much effort to close the gaps either so.
So, is there any originality in this story at all? Feels like the author is absorbing all the elements from famous story around her but fails to actually make it good.
It feels like the Author didn’t include all those details because she is like “you’ve probably read all those stories mentioned by (cookie cutter) above! I made a story with settings and plot points heavily similar with those stories! Therefore, you guys should be familiar with EVERYTHING that happened! sit back and relax while she only needs to alter a few lil scenario to make her story differ from those other more popular series“
And cookie cutter. Didnt the Prince say he abandoned the plan halfway because he loves her? There should be a continuation to his seduction. Is abandoning the plan halfway part of his solid plan too? This dude is making things up as he goes.
You read it this way because you ve read other, better constructed, popular stories. As such, those stories become like a foundation for this one. But once a newcomer read this story without all those aforementioned stories, they see it for what is it–a house without roof, walls, or door. That’s not good writing mate. Not when you especially have to refer to other stories to actually have things in this story explained. You can’t justify this author’s lack of effort in actually explaining whatever she was writing because other already existing stories have explained them. I mean, its basically like your Math teacher in High School refusing to teach you stuff because “y’all have learned it in middle school right? Well, if you dont, you should have!”
No offence, but if you realize how this novel is bad, why are you wasting time translating it? Other sites with dozens of translators, translate bad novels because they prefer quantity over quality and profit with ads or pay walls. I thought that independent translators translate mostly not for money but for the enjoyment of sharing stories they like, isn’t that the case?
Its part of obligation and responsibility. I have taken up this story, i have to at least finish it. Thats my principle. If i dont, its like betraying those ppl who bookmarked this story to see how it ends.
Although i might not enjoy it in a normal sense, others might find it enjoyable. Thats worth the consideration and effort. I dont think anyone would put their faith on a translator that quit a story on a whim just because >said translator< didnt enjoy it. Their faith is also important so they would come back here, after all i also did this for the revenue. Im sorry that im no translator that purely translate out of genuine personal interest to the story.
Other than that, im just a fairly durable Thot-hunter
Well, I really appreciate translators that end their projects, I read too much unfinished novels. I didn’t mean to imply that a translator is a bad person if he translates for money, it’s a job as any other. I only thought that it was difficult to earn enough money for living just translating and it was more like an hobby for you with a side income . If, instead, you earn enough, then, good for you in any case
Mary, I am a reader first before a translator. So you neednt put me on a pedestal. I know how you feel towards unfinished projects too. Other than that, Tiarize is for some reason popular, so the frequency of the update will stay the same. If it drops, i’ll reduce the monthly chapters and prioritize other projects but still finish it.
…i just didnt expect this story to be this……… Incomprehensible………………….. That’s what i get for not reading it properly until the end i guess. I love misunderstanding story too.
And translating for hobby… As you can see from my t/n, roasting is also my hobby so all is good with the world?
Other than that, i just think that when u post sth to internet, especially stuff that have audiences, its not all about you anymore.
fam, what is even going on in this story :”) .
prince keeps throwing curveball after curveball and Tiarize is just spacing out after every reveal. . . and yet i am still hooked on this story?!
Why do I feel like you are now translating this novel not for the sake of finishing it or for the sake of knowing what happens but for the sake of dissing the whole novel……….though I agree with you the Prince is an asshole and my head hurts because of them so Im’ma put of reading this until its finished. I will put them to rest in the shelf beside Amelia and William until I havw a stockpile of medicine for headache…..
Read jill instead!!!
I’ll take up your offer commander since I now have a lot of free time due to the cancellation of my student’s exams caused by the recent happenings…..
Corona huh? Are you panicking inside the house?
No, A BIG NO………while everyone outside is doing some panic buying and panicking over some small matters everyone here at out house are chilling like nothing is happening outside. The only thing I am worried about is my salary….
How long is ur vacation gabe
Nothing is definite yet cause we do not know how long will the corona last but my vacation may end up as long as a month so I might not have a salary for a month unless the parents of my tutees decide to continue their kids’ tutorial sessions with me if they do then I can still have a few income per month but lesser days for vacation….
GABE TURNS OUT KINGDOM OF EVERLASTING NIGHT IS SUPER FLUFFYYY
god I hope she ends up dumping his ass and getting together with viaris. Can’t stand this prince
RIP Antoinette mind
Your notes at the end are what I look forward to most for every chapter. Im s o glad that the translator is as aware and angry as (I) am with this ??
Really… whats even going on anymore…
Thanks for the update though!